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body of mountain, cream and concrete
peeling paint - you are rosacea
defined, crackle skin I run my fingers under
and crush between my teeth. taste of
salt and soil, of burdening years
that rub water in your joints. precious
blessed bridge beauty, breathing heat
and sweating rain, you darling
that shakes, and shakes, and remains.

when I am ash and shadow, wax
for the candlemaker, you'll stand still
silent, soft strain-taker, train-carer,
and hold my love poems
in your cold stones.
my wife
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the bride by ~Taralitha A great, compact love poem. ( Featured by Beccalicious )
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Karinta Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Incredible imagery you conjure!
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Writer
This is very pretty :D
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ManishaChan Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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KTthekitten Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Artist
*faved* >w<
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Bellawho1 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow this is very deep. I really like your poem. :)
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Nickystar101 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
Isn't this your third or fourth dd? ^^ It just shows how amazing your art is!
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:icontaralitha:
Taralitha Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is my third DD ;)
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Nickystar101 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
AMAZING! :D
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cowboy-otaku Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh nice
-must re read now

i actually came here thinking the picture was it
did u take that photo?

peace ^_^
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Taralitha Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes I did.
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